Eportfolio sample science term 1

Jack, you are able to define what an acid and a base is, well done.  You are able to clearly explain the pH scale and you have shown examples of this.
Your next learning step is to continue to work on developing your hypothesis in Science, as these are what you reflect your learning on.
Good job Jack.
Mrs G.

passion project term 1 2019

E-Portfolio: Camp writing

Describe It - Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.

Level 4.

• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.

Learning goals:

• To ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ the reader by painting a picture with words.
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

The bright sun shone onto the clear water as the children entered the waterhole.The screaming began the water was shallow but there was some deep spots.A giant splash drenched me as some kids jumped of the sides of the rocky walls.It was cold so the rocky wall was a welcome relief but a freezing cold breeze came.

The water jumped out of the way as some kids jumped off the rocky wall.They were as loud as a elephant the water felt as cold as ice.At the bottom of the waterhole there were sharp prickly stones.It wasn't so cold when we got out.

Student reflection in my writing one of my goals is to use paragraphs with a sentence topic and supporting detail. I did show this goal here because I wrote two paragraphs with good detail. In my writing one of my goals is listen and act on feedback from others I did show this goal here because I got a dictionary and started checking some of my spelling before publishing. My next step is to use some different ways to plan instead of brainstorm. Teacher Comment: Jack, I like the way you have used strong vocab to add detail and description to your writing.  You are beginning to use a variety of sentence lengths and types to engaged the reader.  Your next step is to develop your sentence starters and use a variety of different starts. - Mrs Hunter

Careers 2018

know basic multiplication and division facts

I'm doing well at my basic facts because there was 20 questions to answer and I got 18/20 twice.
I need to practice doing more division because I still find it tricky.

Groupings to 1000

I enjoy using the strategy
 to work out how many more to 1000 because I like doing things that I understand.

when i first learnt this I
 thought it was going to be hard but its just like groupings to 100 but it got tricky when I did the last one because it was a take away.


I need to practise doing
the take away ones and slow down to make sure I have the right answer

Maori games